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One of my favorite things to write about is the very old elm tree in my back yard. I included a picture of it in my poem today. Isn't it a beauty? I call it the Dragonfly Tree because every fall I see a swarm of dragonflies at the very tip top.
So many inspirations for writing grow from this ancient tree. I love to watch it change throughout the seasons. Each time I write about it, I discover new things to say. It's so much fun to play with poems, especially when they are about something I care about and write about often. So whenever I finish a poem about a topic I write about frequently, I know that I can return to that poem again with fresh eyes.
Sometimes I don't always feel settled on the way a poem turns out, so it's a relief to me to know that I can always go back and change it up. The poem I am sharing today is certainly a great example of how this happens for me. In my "Dragonfly Tree" poem, I knew that I wanted to include lots of repetition and rhyming to mimic the flight and sound of swarming dragonflies. After I had written the poem, I put it to the side for awhile and then reread it. That's when I started to get an itch to play with it. I began to wonder if there were other rhyming or near-rhyming words that I might like better than the ones I had originally chosen. I admit, I was a little overwhelmed by all the choices I had. Then I remembered that it's okay to feel that way. Since I know that I' ll be writing about the Dragonfly Tree again someday, I can revise the poem a bit and move on.
So while this is where I landed with this particular poem, you can bet I'll be writing some other poems to share with you about my favorite tree!
You can learn more about the dragonfly HERE.
Invitation to Write:
Think about some of your magnet topics. These topics are usually things you are drawn to writing about. They might include people, places, or objects. Pick one and write a poem about it, or choose a poem you have already written. Reread your poem and then put it aside. Take a walk or do something else for a little bit just to create some space from what you have written. Then come back to your poem and reread it again with fresh eyes. Think about your poem in a new way. What do you notice? Do you see any places that you might want to spend some more time trying out your other options? Try plugging a few things in and see what you get. You'll know when it's time to move on, but have fun with it until then. It's poetry playtime!
9/10/2016 06:14:01 am
Dragonflies and an ELM TREE?? Thanks for showing me one of the wonders of your world through your poem!
9/10/2016 04:41:35 pm
Ooooooooooooooooooooooh, I love this entry. I love the ruminating you are up to. I love the tree. And, I have a thing for dragonflies already. Wonderful poem. I really feel that trees are my friends. I talk to them, listen to them. Oh, I love to be surrounded by trees. The photo you share shows a tree that has known you a long time. This is a good friend.
9/13/2016 06:02:04 am
Trees are a friends of mine, too! Elms didn't fare too well when I was a child; we lost our huge elm in the backyard to the disease in the early 60's. Dutch Elm disease has taken most all the elms around here now. It's a rarity -and such a blessing - to see one!
9/15/2016 10:17:05 am
Last week I was walking around our pasture and saw the biggest, bluest dragonfly...enchanting! Thank you for this celebration - nature surprises us everywhere. xx
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Welcome! I'm Kiesha Shepard, and I have a love for writing and the teaching of writing. Whispers From the Ridge is a place where I can share my words and ideas for teaching writing. It's also a place for you to find inspiration for writing the words inside of you. I invite you into my world of writing as I capture the whispers from the ridge.
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